Rejected Map Sumbission

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Trickak Pro

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The map has a central theme the hill in between with the ladder tower and the theme of white blocks repeatedly used!
 

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Hello Trickak_Pro,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal based on your message above. If the map is either based on hills or a color white- these are both unoriginal concepts. Either way, the theme isn't very clear when testing the map, which is an issue. Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by checking the map list here.
The build has a few concerns. For one thing, you can't tell what the middle structure is supposed to be. The structure itself is also lacking in detail, being comprised of just one block type. You would be better off trying to pick a better theme that allows you to have a bigger structure with more details.
The parkour also has some concerns. There are a few different jumps seen, but most of your map is repetitive. Make sure that you use different jumps throughout your entire map! The path of your map is also a bit confusing (particularly once you hit the white structure) so make sure you have directions/a clear path for players to follow! You also only have 1 checkpoint on this map that is pretty far out; I would say you need at least 1 more checkpoint somewhere if you want this to be an easy map. The difficulty is also inconsistent, with some jumps feeling too hard for the difficulty. For an easy map, try testing it without a sprint key (i.e double tapping w) as easies are intended for players new to parkour and/or the server. One last thing; any barriers you use need to be marked; unmarked barriers can make your map hard to navigate. You can use either heads or signs to mark them.

Here are some threads to help with your parkour, made by SrMappers/community judges!
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-nerfing-buffing-pk-general-tips.78981/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-show-dont-tell-how-to-path-good-signage-and-directions.78219/

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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