I have mixed feelings about this map. I like the theme and build, but it looks very messy as there are floating blocks all over the place, no checkpoints and an impossible jump underneath the left arm after the ladder headhitter. I would suggest adding a little more detail to the build as it looks very flat. I'm also not a fan of the rainbow colored wool for the jumps, I think you should try adding the blocks onto the build with the same colors that match if or when you rebuild this map for a second try. I am not a map judge so I cannot say whether it will get accepted or not, but if you want it to be accepted I would suggest taking my advice :)