Rejected matzes and MeesiB's parkour (jungle biome theme)

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matzes, MeesiB
Map name: FloatingJungle.
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The warp name is MeesiB.
me and matzes think the diffeculty is medium/hard but make sure to double check that. =)
the parkour has 80 jumps but some of them may not count.
 

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it's not bad could be better 5/10
 

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Here's some tips!

The theme of the map is unoriginal as there are lots of maps similar to this. The build is pretty plane and the parkour is floating in space. I would recommend having a look at the list of maps shinx has put on the top of the map submissions page to see if you map is original or do /log (the name or theme of your map). Make sure the parkour goes against the build and had some good variation. Also check the format of maps as this parkour is too long for a medium/hard

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Hello MessiB & matzes,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many biome related maps already. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original. (CTRL + F on windows and command + F on mac to search for themes in the document)
The build isn't bad, it's accurate to the theme.
The parkour is very repetitive, as most of it is normal block jumps. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items, as well as the way you utilise these, to create more original and enjoyable jumps.
The difficulty is good for an easy/medium map, and the length is good for a hard/expert map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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