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I tested this map out and I really like the build. It's very creative and I have yet to see anything like this. The only real issue I see is the lack of variety within the parkour. Its mainly blocks and fences. Maybe try incorporating some different jumps within the map. Other than that it was built really well and good luck with the submission!
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Hello, regarding my last post on one of ur threads, this is an honest opinion.
The build: Reminds me on a warm coming out of the ground like in the Crazy craft modpack.
Parkour: As you said above, you edited some of the jumps, imo, it is kind of hard in some areas for an easy and the inside is super messy. you can also use world edit with water by doing //set 8 and add some of that for jump variation.
I will give a 0 for now cause the parkour is messy, confusing, and kind of hard in some areas and it also feels a little repetitive.
The build: Reminds me on a warm coming out of the ground like in the Crazy craft modpack.
Parkour: As you said above, you edited some of the jumps, imo, it is kind of hard in some areas for an easy and the inside is super messy. you can also use world edit with water by doing //set 8 and add some of that for jump variation.
I will give a 0 for now cause the parkour is messy, confusing, and kind of hard in some areas and it also feels a little repetitive.
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Hello Sherman8r! Im here to give you my personal opinion on your map! Please note that I am only a mapper and my opinion has no effect on the final decision at all!
1-Build || The build was okay I mean it looks cool but I think you should have put it the other way. The way it is looks like an odd egg. But if you wanted to go all the way around and see what it is you definitely could. I also found the build to be a bit small. There is nothing wrong with that but when it is small, it seems a bit crowded.
2-Originality || As I know of, there are no maps with the theme of "maw” so good job with that!
3-Parkour || I thought the parkour was a bit boring as you only used slabs, fences, iron bars, and ladders. I think next time, you should add heads, vines, pots, anvils, cakes etc. Other than that, I think the number of jumps it a tad bit low but I think its okay.
All in all, good job making this map. This was not meant to offend you in any way! Just a heads up!
1-Build || The build was okay I mean it looks cool but I think you should have put it the other way. The way it is looks like an odd egg. But if you wanted to go all the way around and see what it is you definitely could. I also found the build to be a bit small. There is nothing wrong with that but when it is small, it seems a bit crowded.
2-Originality || As I know of, there are no maps with the theme of "maw” so good job with that!
3-Parkour || I thought the parkour was a bit boring as you only used slabs, fences, iron bars, and ladders. I think next time, you should add heads, vines, pots, anvils, cakes etc. Other than that, I think the number of jumps it a tad bit low but I think its okay.
All in all, good job making this map. This was not meant to offend you in any way! Just a heads up!
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Hello Sherman8r,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps related to this theme, so good job on that!
The build is decently accurate to what you were going for; however, I think the outside could have a more defined shape, as opposed to just a square. There is a decent amount of block variety to be seen.
The parkour is the main concern. It feels more like a medium map, based off of the difficulty of the jumps, but the length is still best suited for an easy map, so I would try to make some of the jumps easier! While there is quite a bit of variation to be seen, the parkour looks a bit messy.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps related to this theme, so good job on that!
The build is decently accurate to what you were going for; however, I think the outside could have a more defined shape, as opposed to just a square. There is a decent amount of block variety to be seen.
The parkour is the main concern. It feels more like a medium map, based off of the difficulty of the jumps, but the length is still best suited for an easy map, so I would try to make some of the jumps easier! While there is quite a bit of variation to be seen, the parkour looks a bit messy.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
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