Rejected Maze Bank Tower Parkour

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Maze Bank Tower
I built this map under inspiration from the Maze Bank Tower in Grand Theft Auto 5 (much higher in the actual game)
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Plot Number: #-90;120
Difficulty: Medium
Number of Jumps: About 62
 

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Maze bank is one of my favorite insanes on Manacube lol. You could try salvaging the build to fit a different theme. Right now the build seems quite generic try adding some specific details to more accurately match a specific theme.

I also suggest looking at the list of themes that shinx has posted of themes that have already been taken. This can hopefully make sure you don’t pick a them already taken as well as possibly generate new theme ideas.
 

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That'd be a shout, what about a giant animal climbing the tower?? King kong vibes? :o
 

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Hello,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING your map submission. Here is my input:

Theme: The theme is not original as we already have a map with this theme (MazeBank). As @A Pink Cow mentioned above, be sure to check the Parkour List to make sure your theme is unique and original.
Build: The build was decent - it matched the theme well (a little on the short side but you addressed that already). It would be nice to use more of the interior of the build for your map as the tower looks pretty boring from the outside (being iron blocks and glass), and maybe re-pathing the parkour to utilize more of the interior space.
Parkour: The parkour was also okay. It fit the difficulty of an EASY map better than a medium, and either way was a bit too long (medium should be 40-60, easy 20-40). The parkour was also pretty boring to play due to the jumps being repetitive - using more than blocks and ladders will help make your parkour more interesting (i.e. heads, anvils, chests, fences, water, etc.)

I'd love to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
 
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