Rejected Medium Parkour Submission - Yellow

[PaytonG]

My Username: PaytonG (/plot visit PaytonG 1)
Map Name: Yellow
Difficulty: Medium
Number of Jumps: 45

Thanks for checking it out!

 

[r3dstraw]

The Theme is Kinda Weird but is Original
And The Build Looks good But there is no Main Build.
The Parkour is kinda easy but im not sure about that since i haven't tried the whole parkour.
I Wish You Good Luck!

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi PaytonG,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
I don't think there is a theme in your map, I more think you build a parkour without really thinking of a theme before, so please try picking a theme next time ! The build is not really good, while I think the sort of castle at the end looks good, the rest looks quite messy and unattractive, try building your parkour on/in a main build, and not floating around like you did. The parkour could be better, it's a bit varied, maybe a bit repetitive, but the parkour is overall good, maybe a bit hard with some jumps ?

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !