Rejected Melon Mayhem - Medium/Hard

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Username: GoldenDonut01

Builders: GoldenDonut01, GoldenDonut02

Map Name: Melon Mayhem

Difficulty: Medium/Hard - there are only 75 jumps but there are a few neos and hard ladder jumps.

Jumps: 75

Plot Warp: /plot visit goldendonut01
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If the map is 72 jumps long, it'd definitely be suitable as a hard or even expert. Based on the parkour, though, I think hard would be the best. Unfortunately, all three themes of the map are unoriginal, which are "3d pixel art", floating islands, and a house. Due to this, it's likely to be rejected. Sorry :( Good luck though!
 
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The idea is good, but the execution was a bit off. You start with the credits, which the outside is all made of melons. The melon texture isn't the most suitable, and also, the jumps seem a little too unoriginal. Finally, looking at the final screenshot, it looks like you can skip practically the entire course. Good luck with getting it verified though!
 

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Hello GoldenDonut01,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, however the build is a bit messy. I like your idea of having the whole building as melons, but having all the parkour floating, makes the build look quite messy overall.
The parkour is quite repetitive, you used a lot of single blocks (melons) for the jumps, try experimenting with a wider variety of blocks and items when creating jumps, it will make the map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The length is good for a hard map, the difficulty suits a medium/hard, with some expert level jumps.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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