Closed Metropolis Map

[ItsRainingMen101]

- Medium Difficulty
- I built the course and I have built many huge builds before and would not brag, but say ima pretty good builder. (Itsrainingmen101 is my username)
- /plot tp itsrainingmen101

 

[ItsRainingMen101]

Ok is anyone going to say anything?

 

[JakeNoot]

Ok is anyone going to say anything?

Be patient with replies- not all maps are going to be replied to by players. Your map will be tested by judges as soon as they get to it.

 

[Nixi]

Hello,

I think the map is in general a pretty cool map, but I'm not really sure if the theme is that unique. Here are a few things you could take a look at:

• Remove the random stone from under the car, or make an actual road there.
• Try using the different types of stone bricks in the stone brick house, it's pretty bland.
• Adding some details to the building would also help.
• Not all the jumps need to be stone.
• Why is the helicopter made of stone too? That's a heavy helicopter if I say so myself.
• Also you could make it so you need to parkour on top of the helicopter.
• You could decorate the inside of the plane.
• Another stone helicopter... How does this thing even fly?
• Make it so you either need to go inside the helicopter and out from the other side, or take out the parkour on the other side.
• More stone jumps...
• I don't know what the ending thing is, maybe a ufo?
• You need to have a wool at the end with a stone pressure plate on top to indicate the difficulty of the map (lime=easy, yellow=medium, red=hard, purple=expert, orange=insane)
• Also the map is way too easy for a medium map, easy would suit it a lot better.

At the moment I do not see this getting accepted, but with a few changes it could have a chance!

 

[JiggleJigglePop]

-6
Kinda bad.

 

[ItsRainingMen101]

• Remove the random stone from under the car, or make an actual road there.
• Try using the different types of stone bricks in the stone brick house, it's pretty bland.
• Adding some details to the building would also help.
• Not all the jumps need to be stone.
• Why is the helicopter made of stone too? That's a heavy helicopter if I say so myself.
• Also you could make it so you need to parkour on top of the helicopter.
• You could decorate the inside of the plane.
• Another stone helicopter... How does this thing even fly?
• Make it so you either need to go inside the helicopter and out from the other side, or take out the parkour on the other side.
• More stone jumps...
• I don't know what the ending thing is, maybe a ufo?
• You need to have a wool at the end with a stone pressure plate on top to indicate the difficulty of the map (lime=easy, yellow=medium, red=hard, purple=expert, orange=insane)
• Also the map is way too easy for a medium map, easy would suit it a lot better.

At the moment I do not see this getting accepted, but with a few changes it could have a chance!

Thank you for all the good tips and ideas and I will keep these all in mind, Instead of improving the map im going to try make a new one, thank you very much for the thread.

 

[Shinxray]

Closing this submission because the map got deleted.