Rejected Minecart rider

[2814]

• Username 2814
• Map name Minecart rider
• Photos of your Parkour
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it /plot 2814 1
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) Easy map
• Number of jumps (Optional) 20ish

 

[Jade]

• Username 2814
• Map name Minecart rider
• Photos of your Parkour
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it /plot 2814 1
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) Easy map
• Number of jumps (Optional) 20ish

It looks good and pretty easy and a small map just add more jumps for me its a plus 1 and a half

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a +1

Positives:

• Parkour fits the difficulty
• Varied jumps
• Fun to play
• Original theme

Negatives:

• The build is too simple
• The barriers are not properly marked

Suggestions:

• Add block variation to make the build more detailed
• Mark the barriers appropriately

Good luck!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello 2814,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps specifically relating to people riding a minecart, so good job on that!
The build is the main concern; it appears a bit plain (particularly on the person.) Although it is accurate to how it would look when one rides a minecart, I recommend adding more details to make it look more appealing.
The parkour is decently varied, and it fits the difficulty, so good job on that! It did feel maybe a bit too easy (yes, that's a thing!) I recommend adding some more jumps OR buffing the current jumps just a tiny bit!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina