Rejected Mira HQ - Insane (resubmission)

[SantaIsReal]

Username: rantaisseal
Map Name: Mira HQ
Warp: /plot v rantaisseal 5
Difficulty: Insane
Jumps: ~168
Checkpoints: 11

Changes from last submission: i removed the 2 longer vent parkours making it shorter and less unvaried overall, i changed a few jumps around the maps and added things like trap doors, vines, and doors, with that it made parts that were easier than other parts a bit harder.

Once again if there are any changes that should be made im happy to change it!

 

[Acrellux]

Looks good

 

[k_rissy]

Hello rantaisseal,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
My stance on your theme is the same as your previous submission.
I honestly wish the build would have been adjusted for this resub; it looks very messy right now, and just cluttered. I get that this may be necessary for the theme but it just ultimately makes the parkour look more messy.
The parkour still felt a bit repetitive, and it is still not fun to play. It feels very much like random jump vomit (there is a difference between varied parkour and random jumps everywhere.) The length is better for an insane map, as is the difficulty of the jumps.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina