Rejected Monorail / Easy

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/plot v xX_SacredPvp_Xx 22 and go to the left.
Map Name: Monorail
Difficulty: Easy
Jumps: 23
Checkpoints: 2
Built By: xX_SacredPvp_Xx
 

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Hello!

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
The theme is original, so good job on that!

The build itself is larger than your previous submission, which means it's more detailed so good job on that! The main thing would be adding and island/details which the monorail sits on, rather than having it floating. This will vastly improve the aesthetic of this build.

As for the parkour, it fits the length and difficulty of an easy map, so good job on that! Unfortunately, the flow itself felt quite clunky as the variation was very random. The last few jumps at the end also felt repetitive.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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