Rejected Music Pk

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Map creators- Oliver_ChoonzYT (currently named JessBulldog995) did most of the work. OlliegamesYT (currently 01189998819991) helped with a bit of parkour. Kitkat40 (currently named jamespencilhead) helped with a little of the parkour..
Map name- Music Pk
Map Difficulty- Easy
Plot warp- /plot visit JessBulldog995 (or if not /plot visit Oliver_ChoonzYT)
# of jumps- Pretty sure 81 (but cant be sure as there is a symetry thing)
# of checkpoints- 3


This map is based of music theory


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alexbuffet

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Hey there,

To start things off the overall theme has been used a bit with the SoundsofMusic and the build of your map is not great and needs more but I think could be improved upon the build quality itself. I found the map very confusing at the end as I could not find a way to the end until I realized there was a staircase of barriers which was very confusing. The parkour in the main build itself I think should be added upon to make it more varied. I think you need to improve upon the build and making the parkour more varied in the jumps. Good luck in submitting!!!
 

Shinxray

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Hoi Oliver and Kitkat,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is not really original, as we already have some "Music" related maps (SoundsOfMusic, K-On! or just all the musical instrument maps), so be careful next time ! The build is not really good, whle I recognize the theme easily, the build is still really messy, and then not really attractive, please try building your parkour on/in a main build, and avoid multiple builds. The parkour is also not really good, while it's a bit varied, I still think it's too repetitive, as it's mostly normal and ladder jumps, so please try using ice, soul sand, vines.. with the blocks you used, but throughout the map, I also think the map is too long for an easy, but too easy for a medium/hard, and lastly, please avoid abusing invisible blocks, it make the map quite confusing, so try replacing them with something else, or just add a sign/item frame on them.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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