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Hey Axelpaxel1243,
I'll be moving this thread to the map submission section, as that is where we review submissions. We will get back to you with a review soon!
Have a great day,
Sil
I'll be moving this thread to the map submission section, as that is where we review submissions. We will get back to you with a review soon!
Have a great day,
Sil
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Hello,
This is all based on the assumption that the map you are submitting is the one on your second plot. For future reference, please follow these map submission guidelines when you submit a map https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/.
Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING your map submission. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is not original as we already have a Tree-themed map and a BlueVSOrange themed map. Be sure to check the Parkour List before building a map to make sure your theme is original. On top of that, pick one specific theme for your map to be based on instead of multiple themes converged into one submission.
Build: The build was pretty boring - the tree was very low effort and had no detailing, and the rest of the build was just wool blocks. Try to make your map one central build that accurately reflects your theme instead of multiple different builds attached to each other with floating parkour.
Parkour: The parkour was the proper length and difficulty for a MEDIUM map - however, it was very repetitive and very boring. Try to incorporate more jumps into your map instead of all ladder/regular block jumps to keep it more interesting (for example, you can use heads, vines, doors, trapdoors, anvils, chests, cacti, flower pots, water, etc.) There were also some problems with the parkour gameplay itself - this slime was unnecessary as you can just jump from the platform to the other, and there was nowhere to go on these ladders to get on top of the section.
I hope to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
This is all based on the assumption that the map you are submitting is the one on your second plot. For future reference, please follow these map submission guidelines when you submit a map https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/.
Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING your map submission. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme is not original as we already have a Tree-themed map and a BlueVSOrange themed map. Be sure to check the Parkour List before building a map to make sure your theme is original. On top of that, pick one specific theme for your map to be based on instead of multiple themes converged into one submission.
Build: The build was pretty boring - the tree was very low effort and had no detailing, and the rest of the build was just wool blocks. Try to make your map one central build that accurately reflects your theme instead of multiple different builds attached to each other with floating parkour.
Parkour: The parkour was the proper length and difficulty for a MEDIUM map - however, it was very repetitive and very boring. Try to incorporate more jumps into your map instead of all ladder/regular block jumps to keep it more interesting (for example, you can use heads, vines, doors, trapdoors, anvils, chests, cacti, flower pots, water, etc.) There were also some problems with the parkour gameplay itself - this slime was unnecessary as you can just jump from the platform to the other, and there was nowhere to go on these ladders to get on top of the section.
I hope to see more submissions from you in the future, and have a great day!
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