Rejected Nature - Normal/Hard

[TheOreganoGod]

Name: Nature
Difficulty: Normal or Hard
Creator: TheOreganoGod
Plot: /plot visit TheOreganoGod
Jumps: 36
Checkpoints: 3

 

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Hey! As awesome as it is that you're submitting a map, I would encourage you to read this post to get a better idea of what to shoot for in a pk map, since as of right now this does not match many of the requirements. Ciao

 

[sapqhire]

Hello TheOreganoGod,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many nature/biome/floating islands related maps already. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great, as it is quite small and simple. In the future, I would recommend having one or two larger main builds that are relevant to your theme, then incorporate the parkour into that.
The parkour is quite repetitive, as most of it is made up of normal blocks. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when creating parkour, as well as experimenting with the way you utilise these, as having a larger variety of jumps will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The length is good for an easy map, and the difficulty is good for an easy/medium map.
I would also recommend reading over this article from our wiki, for some extra mapmaking tips https://manacube.wiki/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.