Accepted Nintendo DS - Easy

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  • Username(s) : Azodia, ThatGirl5arah, Emeenem (PK Builder)
  • Map name : Nintendo DS
  • Photos of your Parkour (Optional)
  • The # of your Plot / or warp name to it : /plot v Azodia 8
  • Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane, Dropper) (You are also free making Donator maps) : Easy
  • Number of jumps (Optional) : 27
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  • Username(s) : Azodia, ThatGirl5arah, Emeenem (PK Builder)
  • Map name : Nintendo DS
  • Photos of your Parkour (Optional)
  • The # of your Plot / or warp name to it : /plot v Azodia 8
  • Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane, Dropper) (You are also free making Donator maps) : Easy
  • Number of jumps (Optional) : 27
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I feel like the colour pallete used gives this build a very grey and boring look. I don't think it resembles the theme very well. I would suggest a change in colours and potentially add some pixel art game to the Nintendo to really spice this theme up! A change in the shape of the ds will help you qdd something to the screen.
 

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When I think of a DS I think of bright colors and stuff, this looks very sad IMO. I'd change it to be like a bright blue or red or even like white, anything other than gray. I also agree with Bin, you should put something on the screen !!
 

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When I think of a DS I think of bright colors and stuff, this looks very sad IMO. I'd change it to be like a bright blue or red or even like white, anything other than gray. I also agree with Bin, you should put something on the screen !!
I changed things up since I submitted this map. If you wanna check out the changes come to my 8th plot.
 

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The red changes make the map look a lot better imo and I still love the little mario accent. Parkour is nice and short and pretty dang fun very much enjoyed it ^-^
 

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Hello,

I shall be putting your map into ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Your map will now be discussed amongst other judges. Please be patient as this may take some time.

If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to start a conversation with me on the forums or message me on discord Hayley#1882.
 

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:kekw: <--- mfw i get no credit for helping :)
 

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Hello!

I am pleased to inform you that your map has been accepted!
The theme is original so good job on that!
The build is accurate and cute. c;
The parkour fits the length and difficulty well. I nerfed the ice to slime/vine jump though!

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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