Accepted Noki Bay - Hard

[khirina]

Name: khirina (SoccerChicken50 made the pk)
Map Name: Noki Bay
Plot: /plot v khirina 5
Dif: Hard
Jumps: 65
Checkpoints: 4



Hopefully this map isnt god awful like i think it is.

btw, i have a major map in the works and it will be finished very soon, so look out for that i guess

 

[GeorgeVa]

Whoa. Very nice build. I'm sure the parkour is amazing too. That plot to your left is looking hot tho...

 

[Chicken]

I'm sure the parkour is amazing too.

Don’t get ur hopes up lmao. I made it

 

[Tas]

I'm not sure if this is based on something, but either way I'm not a huge fan of the build - the excessive //replace command for the walls makes it look messy, and the walls seem sort of symmetrical too, but if it's meant to look like that then it's probably fine. The parkour and theme are fine. Good luck!

 

[Chicken]

That’s Noki Bay. :)

 

[Quinny]

Hello khirina and Chicken,

I am happy to inform you two that this map will be put into reviewing. This means that there are aspects of your map that are really good, but there are clear problems that need to be addressed before the map is fully accepted. You will have until September 19th, 2020 to make changes to the map before it is automatically rejected.

The theme is original, there are many many Mario themed maps, but there are no Noki Bay map currently on ManaCube (or anything else from Super Mario SunShine I don't think). The build is okay, but I would daresay that it's passable. The cliffs feel simply randomized in texture and like there wasn't a ton of thought put into that aspect of the build. I guess overall it doesn't feel as grand as it could or should be. I think addressing some more details from the game could fix this aspect of the map.

The parkour is the main problem with the map. While it fits the hard difficulty, there are a lack of directional signs and the overall path of the map is pretty unclear. There were quite a few times all throughout the map I got pretty lost..or found myself going the wrong way, backwards, etc. While the "puzzle" aspect of the map is a great idea, I think many players would struggle with it.

Thank you for submitting this map! Please message me on Discord when revisions are finished at Quinny#2316. Hope to see more maps from you both soon.

 

[Quinny]

Hi Chicken and khi,

Thank you for making the needed changes on this map! The build is a lot cleaner now, and the addition of some directional signs made the map a lot more clear and fun to play! This map is now being accepted. Hope to see submissions from you both soon!