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What's the theme? genuinely curious
Actual advice:
The ice makes the jump way too easy to overjump imho
In doobix's words: "does the brewing stand serve any purpose other than different jump type... if not, don't use it". The second brewing stand u used make sense because u need the higher level to jump to the wall but this first one could just be a slab lol.
Creative reach is +1 that of adventure mode reach... might wanna see if its too long, idk the distances
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Actual advice:
The ice makes the jump way too easy to overjump imho
In doobix's words: "does the brewing stand serve any purpose other than different jump type... if not, don't use it". The second brewing stand u used make sense because u need the higher level to jump to the wall but this first one could just be a slab lol.
Creative reach is +1 that of adventure mode reach... might wanna see if its too long, idk the distances
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HI Elon_Duck,
Unfortunately your map is being rejected.
Your theme is original, so good job on that!
The build itself is a w/e sphere. The theme itself makes it difficult for it not to be just a world edited sphere. From reference images, there are some scenes where the blue "flares" below are more prominent. This may be way forward for this build. if you do pizzaz up this build more, it'll give you more wiggle room for your pathing.
The parkour fits the length and difficulty of an easy, so good job on that! The parkour itself does feel very random with the variation. Think about flow alongside variation whilst pathing/making your parkour. In addition, I would move the starting platform slightly closer and use the side of the build + more of the inside of the build, rather than having the floating parkour that draws away from the build.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
HI Elon_Duck,
Unfortunately your map is being rejected.
Your theme is original, so good job on that!
The build itself is a w/e sphere. The theme itself makes it difficult for it not to be just a world edited sphere. From reference images, there are some scenes where the blue "flares" below are more prominent. This may be way forward for this build. if you do pizzaz up this build more, it'll give you more wiggle room for your pathing.
The parkour fits the length and difficulty of an easy, so good job on that! The parkour itself does feel very random with the variation. Think about flow alongside variation whilst pathing/making your parkour. In addition, I would move the starting platform slightly closer and use the side of the build + more of the inside of the build, rather than having the floating parkour that draws away from the build.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
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