Rejected Pain Map Submission

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  • Plot 2
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  • 50 Jumps Total (Can be reduced to 49)
 

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I would love to give you a +1 but sadly i will be giving you a -1 for the following reasons

Build:There is no main build -1
Theme:Race
Parkour: Personally, I feel like the parkour fits insane but just not enough variation
 

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I would love to give you a +1 but sadly i will be giving you a -1 for the following reasons

Build:There is no main build -1
Theme:Race
Parkour: Personally, I feel like the parkour fits insane but just not enough variation
I meant to put medium o-o Ripo ;-;

also, it's not really race-themed its just split into two sides then it comes together again, i thought it would be a cool idea i never really meant for it to be a race theme
 

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I would love to give you a +1 but sadly i will be giving you a -1 for the following reasons

Build:There is no main build -1
Theme:Race
Parkour: Personally, I feel like the parkour fits insane but just not enough variation
Fixed the Difficulty thanks .
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Hello Kenzie,

I regret to inform you this map is being rejected. There isn't really much of a theme to this aside from the use of panes. In addition to this, there isn't really much of a build either, the build is kinda just some structures floating around. In the future, try to come up with an original theme (most themes come from pop culture, video games, etc) and check the Parkour List to see if your theme is taken! Try to create a single main build with the parkour on, inside, or around it.

The parkour was not mixed or varied much, consisting mostly of panes, fences, and ladder jumps (kinda crazy you didn't use many normal blocks at all). However, in the future, you want to use many different kinds of blocks all throughout your map to make an interesting and unique course, instead of identifiable by section (the fence section, for example). The parkour fit the difficulty pretty well. If you want solid examples of our requirements executed, feel free to visit /warp beta on the server, or the Accepted Maps subforum.

Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord.
 
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