Hello Magicbarninja,
I regret to inform you that your map is being
rejected.
The theme is
original, as we don't have any maps with this theme, so good job on that!
The build is somewhat accurate to what you were going for. However, it felt a bit flat, so try making it more three-dimensonal and maybe add some other details throughout.
The parkour is the main concern. It is quite confusing as to where to go, and there is an abundance of barriers, so try having a more direct path so players know where to go.
Also when submitting a map, please follow this format: https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina