Rejected Parkour Course - "Redemption" - Insane

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  • Parkour name: Redemption
  • Plot warp: /plot h JinxRaider23 4
  • Course difficulty: Insane
  • Checkpoints: 7
  • Time taken to build: 9 Hours (Approx)
  • Creator/s: JinxRaider23
[DOUBLEPOST=1486295550][/DOUBLEPOST]I hope you like this course guys!! :) Ive tried to make it better than my last 2 which got rejected xD :D

Thankyou soo much if you spend a bit of your time to check this course out! I appreciate it alot.

~Theo
 

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Good parkour and some hard jumps in it, could improve the build though. I don't see how it relates to redemption. :D Good course though, good job Jinx.
 

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Btw _Alfie, thanks for the feedback!!
If you didn't know... the word 'Redemption' means "the action of saving or being saved from sin, error, or evil"...
So with the giant evil snowman, it kinda relates to it. xD
 

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o, I thought it meant that you can redeem yourself.
 

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Hey JinxRaider23,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this course.
I agree with Alfie. The theme and name should fit to the build on the first look and not thinking or asking about it. The build is also only worldedit, which does not look too great. Even a snow man is not only spheres. The jumps are decent, so you can maybe use them for other courses in the future! Thanks for submitting :D

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