Rejected Parkour Submission

[Duckcrafter04]

IGN: Duckcrafter04
Map Name: Flying Swamp
Map Coordinates: 56;33
Recommended Difficulty: Hard

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[Quinny]

Hello there, I will be moving this thread to the Map Submissions subforum so it is in the proper place to be judged. Thanks for submitting!

 

[Duckcrafter04]

ok thx :D

 

[Nathanpls]

I haven’t personally tried this but it looks cool! A little bit difficult to see everything properly with the chat in the way... maybe upload new ones in F1 mode. But I cannot say more until it’s my turn to test this bad boy out!! Good luck!!! :)

Edit:
I've tested your map and I think it's okay.

Blocks needs more variation in my opinion. It's alot of the same jumps.

First of all there's some unnecessary barrier blocks and second there was a water block which I think was wrong.. I will add screenshots on the bottom of this comment to show you!

I agree with Acid when he says that it's already a theme like this but you are good because it's a slime theme.. DON'T take my word for it.

Anyways, good luck!

 

[Acrellux]

I haven’t personally tried this but it looks cool! A little bit difficult to see everything properly with the chat in the way... maybe upload new ones in F1 mode. But I cannot say more until it’s my turn to test this bad boy out!! Good luck!!! :))

Haven't tried it out either, except I do know that this theme has been taken before (the first medium map actually) but there aren't slimes on that map so you may be good.

I'll play your map and give you more feedback soon!

Acid

 

[Shinxray]

Hey Duckcrafter04,
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is not really original, there is already some mushrooms and slime maps (MushroomLand, GiantMushroom, SlimePK, SlimeBouncer), even tho there is not a map with the mix of those 2 themes, please try picking an original theme next time.
The build was also not really good, it's quite floaty and messy, please try building your map on/in a main build, avoid scattered builds if possible.
The parkour was okay, it was quite repetitive sometimes, but it's still kinda varied, however, I think the whole ladder with invisible blocks around the end is very confusing, please avoid overusing invisible blocks since we can't see them in survival mode.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be good to see more maps from you !