Rejected PistonPK - Easy

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Sir_marshall1504

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Authors: Sir_marshall1504 and Kaktus123_123
Map name: PistonPK
Difficulty: Easy
Lenght: 33 jumps and 3 cps
Plot: /plot visit Sir_marshall1504 4

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Hi Marshall! I wanted to give some feedback and my opinion on your map!

Remember I am no map judge! :D

The BUILD is very plain, try using more vaiarity of blocks when making something to create more depth and detail.

The THEME is not really original because there are already many minecraft block themed maps and those as a theme isn't accepted anymore unfortunately

The PARKOUR was alright for a easy map. Both length wise and block viarity. There was one jump that isn't possible, at least not in 1.8.9. The last vine part which can be found below.
https://prnt.sc/12mvlbr

Anyways good luck!
 

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Thanks for advices man! Next time we will try something different!
See you, SirMarshall
 

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Hiya Sir_Marshall.
Sadly your map is being rejected.

The THEME is unoriginal, as we already have large Minecraft blocks in a map. When creating a map, try and come up with an original theme that isn't already used on the server. A full list of already accepted maps can be found here.

The BUILD counts as 3D pixel art, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube. Next time try considering making one large main build with lots of depth and detail that corresponds to your theme!

The PARKOUR of your map is the correct length and difficulty for an easy map, good work on that. Block palette is varied and enjoyable and the navigation is fine. I found an impossible jump on the last vine, so that needs to be fixed. I wish you the best of luck with future submissions.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future. [Jash]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly
 
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