Rejected Plex ~ Expert

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Made By: Blurpyfied

/plot home Blurpyfied 9 or /plot v Plex
Made By: Blurpyfied
Parkour Test By: Inktest, and balls_12
Jumps: 96
Checkpoints: 9
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From the Start, there is a TP Block to the inside of the hand, below is the screenshot of where it ends.
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Hi Blurpyfied,

Your map is being REJECTED

The theme is original so GG

The build however needs a little work. The hands are completely flat where in the reference there is more curvature. It makes the build just seem very blocky. The scaling of the head to body is not correct where the head is way too small for the body, The body also just looks way too thicc compared to the reference. For this I would either robot taller to match the thickness or make the robot skinnier. The face and arms are well done though it looks accurate to the reference.

The parkour fit the difficulty in some spots however the abundance of 3 block ceiling jumps and the crampness of some of the parkour made it kind of annoying to play through because of the deceptive difficulty of the 3bc jumps and the cramped pk.

Thank you for submitting a map. Good luck with future submissions. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me on discord jacobsfunparty#0486.

Thanks,
Jacob
 
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