Rejected Pocketbuilder - Vapor Light (Easy)

[Pocketbuilder]

Creator: Pocketbuilder
Map Name: Vapor Light
Warp: /plot tp Pocketbuilder
Difficulty: Easy




(i seriously need to stop shitting these out, lol)

 

[Pocketbuilder]

Is there a reason for the lack of a response?

 

[k_rissy]

(Sometimes other posts show up at a similar time and we don't see that someone has posted. I apologize)

I'll be giving this a 0. I believe that the theme is original, but I'd be lying if I said I knew the theme. The build is well-done and it's appealing to look at; however, it may be considered a bit plain. Consider using blocks other than wool. As for the parkour: Consider adding more variety with the jumps. I believe it fits the easy difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3

 

[Pocketbuilder]

Thanks! I will update it when I get home (add more variety and change some of the wool). The theme is vaporwave btw.

 

[Pocketbuilder]

Made a few edits based on Katrina's suggestions.

• Changed all of the wool to Stained Clay
• Added some more ladder jumps, a few water jumps, a few slime block jumps, and a few pane jumps
• Revamped the end (it felt a little boring before)

 

[AlfieJay]

Hey, so I'm going to REJECT this map. The build is a bit messy at the end as well as not being too clear. The parkour is also quite repetitive although the water was a nice touch (Shinxray nicely fixed it for you). Thanks for submitting your map :D