Rejected Prehistoric Parkour - Expert Map

[DWCombat]

Creator: DWCombat
Name: Prehistoric Parkour
Plot ID: 124;69
Difficulty: Expert
Number of Jumps: 100-102

 

[EAAgatha]

Cool! Just a heads up there is alr a Jurassic map idk if they fall into the same catagory, they might but that looks super cool!

 

[BinLicker]

The theme is unoriginal as the is a fossil map already please take some time to look over this: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ before you make a map

 

[DWCombat]

Is it? I looked in that thread and didn't see fossil map in it, but maybe I just read past it.

 

[Presidenten]

The fossil map has a rather different build than this one. So I think the theme here is no problem as long as it has a different name.

 

[Acrellux]

The parkour looks like most of it is made of just blocks, and some is floating, I suggest you try to put the parkour around the build and add some varied jumps to it other than ladders, like flower pots, vines, slime jumps!

 

[DWCombat]

Thanks for the ideas! I just fixed it up a bit. Let me know if it's better and if I need to add anything else.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello DWCombatW,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is pretty accurate to what you were going for; however, it would be nice to see some additional details throughout.
The parkour is the main concern. The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps are good for the expert difficulty, so well done there! However, it is a bit repetitive with chests and ladders; try to utilize other different types of jumps throughout your map. The parkour is also floating quite a bit (meaning it isn't attached to your main build) which makes it look quite messy. There are also quite a few confusing segments, so please try to have a more direct path so your map can be more enjoyable.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina