Rejected Pumpkin Patch - Easy (RESUBMISSION)

[carvhes]

Made By: carvhes
/plot home carvhes (plot 1)
Jumps: 30
Checkpoints: 3
Pictures:

Notes: I appreciate the kind comments about the build! I agree the jumps were mainly ladders, so I added in a variety of new jump types! I also added in a new base to the bottom of the map. Hope you enjoy it!

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello carvhes,

I regret to inform you that your map has been REJECTED.

The build is accurate to the theme, so good job on that! I would add a little detail to the ground around the pumpkin such as tilled dirt and coarse dirt to give it more of a realistic feeling (the ground around pumpkins isn't very perfect!).

The parkour has a lot more variation this time so good job on that! There are a few jumps that are either too hard or impossible in 1.8.9 so please be sure to make sure all jumps are possible before submitting. The back of the parkour is messy as it's floating, I'd suggest re-doing your parkour pathing to fix this.

Please do not hesitate to message me if you need any help.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley