Mmh... I found a few things to get fixed! ;)
1. Why did you use sandstone and wood for the pies? I would use something like different clays and wools but that's not a big problem.
2. Bigger problem is that this jump isn't possible without /speed!
If the word "Pie" was not there, I wouldn't be able to tell that you tried to make a pie.... Sorry, just looks like you put minimal effort into this map.
Hello, My name is Tenshi and I am here to give you some tips and comments about your parkour map. Firstly, Theme. This map seems to have a unclear theme. This looks like one of those "Im out of ideas" parkour maps. No, Im not saying that this is rejected, But Ive seen much better effort and work from you Angel. Also, Why did you chose to use wood for the pie?