Hello,
I regret to inform you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is original to an extent; however, it is very hard to portray so I'd suggest going for another theme.
The build itself doesn't show the theme well at all. Build a large main build showing off the aspects of your theme well.
The parkour fits the length and difficulty of the map so good job on that! Sadly, there are only normal jumps which causes it to become repetitive. Be sure to add more variance such as heads, trapdoors, water, ladders, fences, glass panes, etc to make the parkour more enjoyable.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley