Rejected shinx - easy - (resub)

[relishbb]

• remedia, gkotis
• shinx
• https://prnt.sc/wZrt7wfqnL23
• https://prnt.sc/FLbRZjr0T2Yf
• /plot v remedia 3
• easy

thanks gkotis for fixing the parkour <3

 

[Mr_DagALkeef_B7]

Good luck!

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

I shall be putting your map into ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Your map will now be discussed amongst other judges.


Please be patient as this may take some time. If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to start a conversation with me on the forums or message me on discord Hayley#1882.

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

Your map will be put in reviewing.
The theme is original, so good job on that!

The build is where the main concern comes in. Overall, the shaping of the build looks too "big" in proportion to reference picture. In addition, the shaping of the tail and additional neck shaping needs to be changed. The cheek/mouth of the build also needs to be change. This is the reference photo we were looking at:

http://imgur.com/voUN34h

The parkour was fun, there are just a few minor changes we'd like to have changed in regards to checkpoints/parkour aesthetics. Feel free to message me further regarding this.

Your will have until November 6th to make these changes or your map will be rejected.
If you have further questions, do not hesitate to message me on discord hayleyxx

Have a good day/night
-Hayley

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello!

As discussed in messages, unfortunately, your map is being rejected as the changes have not been made.

The changes we are expecting are all above. Feel free to message me if you need further assistance.
We hope to see more submissions from you in the future
Have a good day/night
-Hayley