Rejected shinx - medium - re-resub :D

[relishbb]

• llawcritic + sproutified
• shinx
• https://prnt.sc/pwhKr0xUx8e7
• https://prnt.sc/RQHc_j5I40vO
• /plot v remedia 3
• medium?

his face is bigger and chubbier now.

it had to be done.

 

[Mr_DagALkeef_B7]

Good luck! ebay

 

[NEJIRE HADO]

Good luck

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

Sorry for the late response
I shall be putting your map into ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Your map will now be discussed amongst other judges. Please be patient as this may take some time.

If you have any further questions, do not hesitate to start a conversation with me on the forums or message me on discord Hayley#1882.
Happy Holidays!

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello!

Sorry for the delayed response.
Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.

The build shaping still needs to be worked on. Overall, the feet are quite chunky and the face is uneven.@

The parkour is where the main concern comes in. There are a few obstacles that are redundant and do not do anything in terms of difficulty. The overall parkour does not flow well. In addition on checkpoint three, the pathing up to the ladder/slime causes a disruption to the flow. It'd be much better to have some parkour rather than a ladder.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley