Rejected Shinxray - Easy

[Blurpyfied]

Made By: Blurpyfied
/plot home Blurpyfied 5
Jumps: 24
Checkpoints 4
Picture:

http://imgur.com/a/clUq6kC

 

[Presidenten]

-1 build looks weird i havent played pk

 

[MarvelFamily]

So this is the map I have heard so much about...

 

[Elly_x]

Hello Noah,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is originial, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. Can you possibly send me your reference photo so I can give you more constrictive feedback? When looking on google for references, it seems to be missing a lot and has aspects that isn't usually on a Shinx (example the ears and the tail). The shaping is also a bit off, but if you send the reference I can give you exact things.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, the map is pretty much all regular blocks and walking from point A to point B. There needs to be some fun in it, especially because it is an easy map. There needs to be more jumps than walking. The actual jumps need to be fixed as well to incorporate some more creativity.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly