Rejected Sou Hiyori - Expert

[maddiemaid]

MAP NAME - Sou Hiyori
THEME - Character from Kimi Ga Shine (Your Turn To Die)
DIFFICULTY - Expert
JUMPS - 82
USERNAME - bunnyspanny
PLOT - /plot v bunnyspanny 1

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[Anthony (ft18m)]

Based on the pictures it looks creative and original. Good luck!

 

[Brooklynito]

I really like this map, but the blocks dont vary. Try adding more types of blue blocks for the jacket to make it look more appealing! Best of luck!

 

[maddiemaid]

thank you brook!! i updated the jacket and pants to have more variety in the jumps

 

[ThePKFish]

Hello,

I am sorry to inform you that this course is being rejected. The build could be improved. It is recognizable as the character, but the build is quite one dimensional with strange shading. The parkour is mostly varied, but could be improved to be more fun. Most of the jumps do not fit expert difficulty and are quite easy. The overall parkour is very unbalanced. The theme, however, is original so good job on that! Overall, the build and parkour both need improvement.

Thank you for submitting this course!
If you have any questions, you may DM me on here, in game, or on discord!

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)