Rejected Space adventure- made by SoccerChicken50 and Minester1234

[Chicken]

Hi, me and my friend Minester1234 made this map together at my plot (SoccerChicken50). We have rated it as a medium map and contains 5 checkpoints and 87 jumps. We are prepared to change it in any way to suit guidelines. Thanks

 

[LovelyLing]

Hello! I’m here to give you my opinion on your map! Just note that this is my opinion and it has to affect on the final decision at all!

1-Originality || The theme of space or planets sadly is not very original. This lowers your chance of the map being accepted. Before you start a map, you should look at the maps that have already been done. I don’t have the link but I bet someone else will.

2-Build || The build looks good in my opinion. It looks somewhat detailed and looks pretty cool. Nice job on that. But you should have a central build instead of 10 different builds.

3-Parkour || In the submission, the only thing I see is regular blocks. Try spicing it up a bit! Add things like slimes, enchantment tables, water, ladders etc! The number of jumps is wayyyy too high for a medium map. This would be better off as a hard but I don’t think the jumps are difficult enough for a hard map.

All in all, nice job building this map. I’m not sure on your chances but good luck anyway! This was not to hurt your feelings at all! Just a heads up!

 

[Chicken]

Hello! I’m here to give you my opinion on your map! Just note that this is my opinion and it has to affect on the final decision at all!

1-Originality || The theme of space or planets sadly is not very original. This lowers your chance of the map being accepted. Before you start a map, you should look at the maps that have already been done. I don’t have the link but I bet someone else will.

2-Build || The build looks good in my opinion. It looks somewhat detailed and looks pretty cool. Nice job on that. But you should have a central build instead of 10 different builds.

3-Parkour || In the submission, the only thing I see is regular blocks. Try spicing it up a bit! Add things like slimes, enchantment tables, water, ladders etc! The number of jumps is wayyyy too high for a medium map. This would be better off as a hard but I don’t think the jumps are difficult enough for a hard map.

All in all, nice job building this map. I’m not sure on your chances but good luck anyway! This was not to hurt your feelings at all! Just a heads up!

Thanks for the advice! In side the rockets there’s jumps such as slime jumps and ladder jump. I also added a neo jump and a few head bangers but this was my personal 2nd map and his first. Thanks for the advice and wel definitely take it all into co side ration for next time. Thank you.

 

[IPattyI]

Hey SoccerChicken50,

I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. The theme is not very original as we have multiple space/planet/rocket ship themed maps. Such as ToyRocket, SpaceShip, Planets, Galaxy, EarthCenter, SaturnV, and Planets. It is just a very over-saturated theme. The build was executed decently but it's really not original at all. Multiple maps with the same theme have built the same you have but in better ways. These being with better detailing, shaping, and parkour integration (it really just kinda floats all over the map). The PK is way way too long for the medium difficulty, you have to cut down on a lot of jumps. But, I believe it fits the difficulty well in regard to its difficulty. Also, I found the parkour to be very repetitive and boring. There were way too many segments where it was just jumping from identical block to identical block. You need to use a variety of jumps/blocks when making parkour to make sure it's enjoyable to the player. I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting future maps, good luck!