Accepted SpittyAlpaca - Medium

[Bloro]

Map Name: SpittyAlpaca
Map Location: /plot v Blororis 2
Map Difficulty: Medium
Number of Jumps: ~56 Jumps
Number of Checkpoints: 3 (including the one at the beginning)
Creator: Blororis
Helpers: sillllllllllllll, Kubikit, Gweedyy
Attached below is a picture of the build:

This is my first map and I’d like to hear suggestions and advice from you guys. Thank you!

 

[Samanthaa_x]

i love the build itself!! its very cute and wholesome :D do u have any pics of the actual parkour?

 

[Bloro]

i love the build itself!! its very cute and wholesome :D do u have any pics of the actual parkour?

Hi Samantha! Yes I do and here they are.

Thanks for your reminder, and I will definitely remember to put these in my post next time ;)

 

[Samanthaa_x]

Hi Samantha! Yes I do and here they are.
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Thanks for your reminder, and I will definitely remember to put these in my post next time ;)

As i said i love the build and theme of it, however i feel like the parkour is a little plain and simple. The inside also lacks a bit of detail, but i feel like that is easily fixable :D i would give it a 0.4 as of now.

 

[Uneasilly // Sil]

Cute build. The alpace is cute and I like how u put ur skin on it. Parkour is fun and varied, except for the part with a lot of ladders and heads, u could use some more jump variation there. Overall the map seems pretty nice :)

Best of luck Boris! -Sil

 

[Bloro]

Cute build. The alpace is cute and I like how u put ur skin on it. Parkour is fun and varied, except for the part with a lot of ladders and heads, u could use some more jump variation there. Overall the map seems pretty nice :)

Best of luck Boris! -Sil

Thank you Sil! <3

 

[Quinny]

Looks pretty good Boris! I wish your skin’s head and the alpaca body were a bit more rounded, but that’s about the only thing I’d change build wise. Haven’t looked at the parkour yet but I will a bit later :)

 

[Bloro]

Looks pretty good Boris! I wish your skin’s head and the alpaca body were a bit more rounded, but that’s about the only thing I’d change build wise. Haven’t looked at the parkour yet but I will a bit later :)

Thank you very much Quinny <3

 

[JJ (_ThatGuyJJ_)]

Hi Boris! I love this build an think it is adorable. As stated above the inside of the build is a little bit bland. This can be fix quite easily with a simple pink and red color scheme inside. I would give this build a +.5 regardless! Gl!

 

[Bloro]

Hi Boris! I love this build an think it is adorable. As stated above the inside of the build is a little bit bland. This can be fix quite easily with a simple pink and red color scheme inside. I would give this build a +.5 regardless! Gl!

Thank you very much JJ <3

 

[Bloro]

Hi all,
I have changed up the interior design due to the suggestion of other fellow parkourers. I have added some lava on the bottom of the alpaca's body to mimic blood/stomach acid and replaced the plain pink wool to a more interesting red + pink. Here is the picture.


Thank you all for your advice! ;)

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Blororis, sillllllllllllll, Kubikit & Gweedyy,

I will be putting your map in Reviewing for the following reasons.
The theme is fairly original, and the build is good. The build is cute, as well as accurate to the theme, so well done!
The parkour is well varied. You used a great range of blocks and items, to create original and enjoyable jumps.
The main issue I find, is that the parkour is too difficult. For example, the section at near the start with the double neo is quite difficult, especially considering the map is quite long as well. There were a few other jumps which I'm more than happy to explain and show to you, just message me on discord - madi#5198 or message me on the forums.
Another minor detail, is I would suggest adding something like an item frame on some of the bigger barrier sections, as I found it to be quite confusing.
Once these changes have been made, either message me in-game, on the forums, or on discord - madi#5198 and I will retest your map.

Thanks!
- Madi

 

[sapqhire]

Hello,

Now that these changes have been made, I'm happy to tell you your map has been Accepted!
Like I previously mentioned, the theme and build are good, as well as the parkour being enjoyable and well varied.
The overall parkour path is a lot clearer now, and the jumps are better suited for a medium map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.