Rejected Stew-Expert (Mybestmap)

[Microgear]

Stew
Expert
90-100 jumps
idrk how many cp 4?
/plot v microgear

I spent so long creating this map i hope u like it

Credits-pkfish,Tasses

 

[lolol]

so i'll be giving you a 0

Theme: i'm not sure if there's a soup map but there is a carrot-themed map, making this somewhat unoriginal 0
Build: by far your best one yet, you could add some more shape to the bottom of the bowl, and the floating vegetables are a bit messy. but the rest is good 0
Parkour: also your best parkour i've seen, you need to add 2 or 3 more checkpoints and buff some of the jumps near the start but i like it c: 0

i definitely think this map has potential and can be accepted, so good luck c:

(also you used a single glass pane here :c)

 

[Microgear]

so i'll be giving you a 0

Theme: i'm not sure if there's a soup map but there is a carrot-themed map, making this somewhat unoriginal 0
Build: by far your best one yet, you could add some more shape to the bottom of the bowl, and the floating vegetables are a bit messy. but the rest is good 0
Parkour: also your best parkour i've seen, you need to add 2 or 3 more checkpoints and buff some of the jumps near the start but i like it c: 0

i definitely think this map has potential and can be accepted, so good luck c:

(also you used a single glass pane here :c)
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I will fix everything u mentioned

Edit I fixed everything but the carrots coz I cba

 

[curtis]

I pretty much agree with everything bunstop said. But I do think the soup itself needs some work
Its too flat. Maybe you can shape some veggies in it or add a giant spoon inside of it that can be added to the parkour?

 

[Microgear]

I pretty much agree with everything bunstop said. But I do think the soup itself needs some work View attachment 19769
Its too flat. Maybe you can shape some veggies in it or add a giant spoon inside of it that can be added to the parkour?

K i did a bit of work on the bowl it looks a lot better

 

[Presidenten]

This map gets a +0,5 from me

The build is simple but it works, there may be too much floating stuff but I think it's fine.
Parkour is somewhat easy for expert in my opinion, and it is kind of repetitive (many ladder jumps and neos)

Other than that it's a good map, It's fun to see you improve!
Good luck!

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a +0 for now

Positives:

• Original theme
• The builds are fun and colorful
• The length of the map is good for an expert map

Negatives:

• It's too easy for an expert map, there's quite a few neos, which, while they are hard for some people, once you get the hang of them they are very easy.
• The jumps are all pretty basic, none of the jumps were particularly creative
• There's lots of floating things, but in this case I don't mind that much

Suggestions:

• Work on the parkour to make it more challenging and unique. Use block height to your advantage to make jumps more precise.
• fix the single glass pane on top of the floating tomato, as single glass panes are not allowed

Good luck with your map! This has good potential.

 

[Microgear]

any more feedback would be great ty :)

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Microgear,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, because we don't have any specific "stew" maps. However, as mentioned above, there is a map centered around carrots (Carrots,) and your map does focus on carrots a lot.
The build is a bit messy, with all the vegetables just floating around. To help make this look more accurate, I recommend putting all the vegetables in the bowl, so that it resembles an actual stew. (Although to achieve this, a decent portion of the build would have to be redone) I also think the bowl itself could use some more details, as it looks plain right now.
The parkour is somewhat varied. but the use of neos and ladders is a bit repetitive. The main issue with the parkour is the difficulty. The length is good for an expert map, but the jumps are too easy. I would make the jumps slightly harder. Be careful not to make them too hard, though. I also think you should incorporate the parkour with the theme more. Some of the blocks used just don't make sense in a map of this theme. You could use some heads, for example, that represent vegetables!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina