Rejected Strider- Easy/Medium?

[ren6531]

• created by ren6531
• Map name: Strider
• Plot ID: 137;-41
• Difficulty: Easy (It might be medium, but I also might just be bad at my own parkour)
• About 42 jumps with 2 checkpoints

(are the baby striders eyes creepy? I could make them a little bigger to fix that if needed?)

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[JASO0ON]

Unique concept but it lacks a bit of quality.

 

[ren6531]

Unique concept but it lacks a bit of quality.

Thanks for the feedback! What do you mean by quality? like the build, the design or the pk? or all of it?

 

[JASO0ON]

Thanks for the feedback! What do you mean by quality? like the build, the design or the pk? or all of it?

The pk mostly

 

[k_rissy]

Hello ren6531,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original; however, we do have a lot of Minecraft mob maps, so keep that in mind.
The build is accurate to what you were going for; however, it looks quite plain. I understand that this is due to your reference, but try to give it some more details/depth throughout.
The parkour is has some different jumps, but feels quite repetitive with the use of ladders and full-blocks. Try incorporating some new jumps into your maps; this player-made guide can help you out- https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!