Rejected submission for my TRENCH map!

[Crihyde]

my username is crihyde and i made a map themed around one of my favorite albums "trench". i think that the map should be under expert or insane just because the length of 304 jumps. /warp crihyde . after each song there is a checkpoint

 

[PyroTortilla]

This is going to be a +0 from me. Most of the jumps are floating, and 304 jumps is an insanely high number (maybe the highest on the server don’t fact check me though). Good luck!

 

[WaffleLord47]

This is going to be a -1 from me. I do see the trench portion of the map, but it’s so small that there isn’t really a dominant theme. Most of the jumps are floating, and 304 jumps is an insanely high number (maybe the highest on the server don’t fact check me though). Good luck!

It isn't actually a trench. "Trench" is an album by 21 pilots

 

[Aztec]

You clearly put a lot of time into this.

Chicken says +1

 

[PyroTortilla]

It isn't actually a trench. "Trench" is an album by 21 pilots

Oh I’m blind. I looked up Trench 21 pilots and I still don’t understand the similarity between this map and the album but for now I’ll change my previous rating into a 0.

 

[piebrian5]

it’s going to be a -0.5 from me

This is because the theme is interesting and original I like it. Plus some of the builds are alright. This map is way too long for any type of difficulty and from the screenshots I’m assuming too easy for an insane as well. The parkour is also very floaty you should have it attached to ideally to one main build as a bunch of floating jumps makes the map look messy and unattractive. You should also have better variation in your jumps you can use things like enchanting tables, pistons, glass panes, chests, flower pots, etc. I see that you put a lot of time and effort into this map and I see potential in a bit if it’s going to get accepted I believe that you will need to make some pretty big changes to fix the things that I’ve said above. Good luck!

 

[Presidenten]

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Original theme but im not sure its well executed, parkour is too long and everything floats too much

 

[Dangerousshovel]

-0.5 from me,
Because there are too many floating jumps, which makes the PK look confusing and messy. And 304 jumps are way too many for a map, you should definitely check out the map submission requirements before submitting one!

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Crihyde,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, the build isn't great, it looks a little messy as it is mainly floating islands.
The parkour is very repetitive. I understand with the number of jumps there are in this map, it is difficult to avoid the jumps being repetitive, but I feel that there definitely could still be more variety within the number of jumps. I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
Most of the jumps are floating, please try to implement the jumps more within the build, rather having them floating around it and the void, this can make the map look quite messy.
The difficulty is good for a medium/hard map. The length is far too long, please read over this thread https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ to make sure your map fits within the guidelines.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.