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- Thread starter yoyoyo234
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Try to add more information about your map! Look at the submission format: https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
The map looks really cool! It looks really 3D. Cuz a lot of people, just make a 2D screen when they build a TV, but your tv looks really nice with the depth effect. You could use some more different blocks for the table though. Now you've just used brown clay, but you could also add blocks like different types of wood. I can see that the parkour isn't really varied. For example, on the right side of the tv you've just used stairs and slabs.. Try to add blocks like: Vines, water, chests, anvils, brewing stands, light sensors, flower pots, etc. If you make the parkour vary more, this map could definitely get accepted. :) good luck!
The map looks really cool! It looks really 3D. Cuz a lot of people, just make a 2D screen when they build a TV, but your tv looks really nice with the depth effect. You could use some more different blocks for the table though. Now you've just used brown clay, but you could also add blocks like different types of wood. I can see that the parkour isn't really varied. For example, on the right side of the tv you've just used stairs and slabs.. Try to add blocks like: Vines, water, chests, anvils, brewing stands, light sensors, flower pots, etc. If you make the parkour vary more, this map could definitely get accepted. :) good luck!
Hey @yoyoyo234 i can’t seem to find map please visit https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ and add some more info about your map one thing I would say though is that your map is probably unoriginal
Hello Mothaquacka,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, and the build isn't bad. It is built well, but I would suggest using more types of blocks within the build, to add a bit more detail, considering most of it is plain coloured wool.
The parkour is quite repetitive. You did use a few different blocks in your jumps, but you did group a lot of them. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of just stairs, then iron bars, then slabs etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more as this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The difficulty is good for an easy map, but the length might be a little long, not a big deal though.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, and the build isn't bad. It is built well, but I would suggest using more types of blocks within the build, to add a bit more detail, considering most of it is plain coloured wool.
The parkour is quite repetitive. You did use a few different blocks in your jumps, but you did group a lot of them. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of just stairs, then iron bars, then slabs etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more as this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The difficulty is good for an easy map, but the length might be a little long, not a big deal though.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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