Rejected The Dungeon - Hard

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Username: Crabby2555
Map Name: The Dungeon
Photos: 1 Minecraft 1.21.4 - Multiplayer (3rd-party Server) 12_8_2024 7_35_27 AM.png
Plot: 139,137 or /warp the dungeon
Jumps: about 70
Description: you were thrown in the dungeon for tax evasion. Will you ever make it out alive?
Note: please don't judge it just by its looks on the outside.
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Hayleyx

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Hello!

Unfortunately, your map has been REJECTED.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have dungeon-like maps!

The build itself does lack some shape and detailing. As it it all one shape, you cannot be as creative in the texturing, details and detailing. I would suggest having more landscaping/overall shaping to each layer to accompany for this. You would also be able to shape the outside and add details that it is currently lacking!

The map does fit the length, so good job on that! The parkour itself was too easy for a hard, with some skips! Be sure to skip test! The parkour did feel quite repetitive as you only had normal jumps and ladders for the most part. Use more variation such as slimes, water, heads, cocoa beans, daylight sensors, iron bars, fences, etc. to space out your variation!

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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