Rejected The Forest! (Easy)

[tigger101010]

Tigger101010
The Forest
easy
20-21 - 1 difficult jump
I have no clue how to find the # and or the change the name of the plot this is my first time making a plot and or a doing this type of thing.

 

[IPattyI]

Hey Tigger101010,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have an over-abundance of "Forest"-related maps, this map is most definitely unoriginally themed. You should procure to check our parkour list as to prevent recycling old themes/maps: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: In my opinion, there's barely a build present on this map. You put two floating islands of dirt with trees on them at the sides and then put in some parkour that doesn't even attempt to be integrated into the "forests". You need to work on portraying your theme and integrating your parkour properly so that you have a real build that is attractive and cohesive.
• Parkour: The parkour is definitely on the shorter side, but, is quite easy, so it's passable. But, there were issues with the variety present on it. Your map was basically hh and fences jumps with some walking in between. You need to be more creative when making parkour and use a variety of blocks/jumps.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!