Hello money225, I am sorry to say your map is being rejected.
Theme: The theme was mainly just lava or nether- or at least thats what i took away from the build! It's a very common theme.
Build: There was a lack of coherent or central build, I would have liked it better if there was something central to focus on!
Parkour: The parkour was rather easy, and lacked jump variation.
Thanks for taking the time to submit your map, hopefully, you will submit more in the future!
Have a good day, and happy map building- Cele <3