Rejected The Mariana Trench

[Mushey]

Hello! I have made another parkour map! And I would like to be it looked over!

Parkour Info:
Parkour Name: The Mariana Trench
# of Jumps: About 93
Difficulty: Medium
# of Checkpoints: 3
Testers: Joeyism, ForeverTeletubby, and SlashMuteJJ
Creator: YourMushey

Pictures:
/plot h:5 YourMushey to see the full preview of the map! (/creative also since its on the creative server)

 

[Bugsnax]

i love this map. hope it gets accepted

 

[Txilsy]

Hello Mushey,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

Points that influenced the decision:
- The theme is original, I really liked how it went into different layers and had a little back story/information.
- The build itself is not attractive at all when seen from the outside. It's pretty much just a big box with different layers of colours. When building a course, make sure it looks somewhat attractive. This can be easily achieved when building an organic build or structure. Take a look around the parkour world for some reference.
- The map and jumps remind me of an adventure map, which is a good thing. The jumps are not too straight forward and have some variety, although there could be more different type of jumps used; fence, water, ladder and many more. Also, make sure to not use too many barriers as they can confuse a player, especially when being in adventure mode.
- The length suits the medium difficulty, but is leaning towards hard, considering a lack of checkpoints combined with the jump difficulty.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.

Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.