Hello,
I regret to inform you that your map has been REJECTED.
The theme is unoriginal as we already have maps based around melons.
The build of your map is a concern. Most of the parkour is floating which causes the map to look messy. Build a main build/island so that you can path your parkour around it and add the detail and depth that this map is currently lacking.
The parkour of your map is too short and a little inconsistent. At the end of your map there is a double neo which is too difficult for a medium map. Be sure to make sure the parkour's consistent! There are also single glass panes incorporated into your jumps which aren't allowed. You can add more variance with heads, ladders, water, daylight sensors, flower pots etc to make your parkour more enjoyable!
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley