Please Stop doing so many parkours
@Angel_Scarz, I know you have skills to make nice parkour maps, but like
@zootbot said, your rate of doing parkour maps is like 6 in a week. I personally use about a week for every single one of my own maps so I find every single mistake and I can improve my maps. Even once try to find a good theme and work to get it done! Work is not 10-15 minutes, I use even hours to test jumps and sometimes when I have created a map I even delete it, only because I think that my parkour wasn't perfect!
About the map... Sorry, I just say critique.
1. The islands were boring, because every single island was looking same; grass, tree and ores.
2. Every single one of your jumps was a grass block; boring.
3. The theme looked exactly the same than pokezelda's Tale of Two-parkour, because both parkours have story, islands and the parkour just feels same!
4. The theme is bad. Only thing that reminded me from the theme "The quest for the diamond sword" were the signs and most of people don't even read the signs so you have to make them feel the theme otherwise.
Last but not least if you have some sort of "Part 2" coming, why would you not do it in same map as the first part, because on the parkour server people don't know that the second one is extension (I don't know about that word because I googled it :p) from the first part because the parkours cannot be even side by side on the parkour server!