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Sorry I don't know why there have Chinese maybe is my translate make that I talk about my map here again
Theme: The Rainbow And The Hell
Creator: tony999J909Cp8J , QAQ0428
Map Name: Rainbow-And-The-Hell
Difficulty: Checkpoint 4 ,Skeleton head double fence neo jump
Expert
Jumps : 106
Cheakpoint : 7
This is my first map if there any mistake tell me I will change it :> TY
Theme: The Rainbow And The Hell
Creator: tony999J909Cp8J , QAQ0428
Map Name: Rainbow-And-The-Hell
Difficulty: Checkpoint 4 ,Skeleton head double fence neo jump
Expert
Jumps : 106
Cheakpoint : 7
This is my first map if there any mistake tell me I will change it :> TY
sry mb i meant the title lol, ur all good dwai
english wise ur good
i just meant that the way mana is they want a clear map with a clear, defined theme.
oi map judges, the tp is:
/plot v tony999J909Cp8J 1
+ u have sections have pk stlyes (i.e. iron bars, ladders), might be too repetive
+ no steady theme
english wise ur good
i just meant that the way mana is they want a clear map with a clear, defined theme.
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oi map judges, the tp is:
/plot v tony999J909Cp8J 1
+ u have sections have pk stlyes (i.e. iron bars, ladders), might be too repetive
+ no steady theme
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First Thank you you to teach me something
actually I think this map get accept is very low
TY for your idea I will use your idea in the next map:>
Sir you really nice hope you have a nice day ty
TY you I have seen another people in their post type this down but I don't know what this mean
Now I know it TY you sir
actually I think this map get accept is very low
TY for your idea I will use your idea in the next map:>
Sir you really nice hope you have a nice day ty
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TY you I have seen another people in their post type this down but I don't know what this mean
Now I know it TY you sir
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Hello!
Unfortunately, your map is rejected.
The theme itself is quite unoriginal, as we already have rainbow/similar looking maps!
The build itself does lack a lot of shaping. The tower itself is a long cylinder, with no other details such as windows & stairs/slabs for shaping. In addition, your build lacks quite a lot of texturing, as it is all one solid colour/block (wool).
The parkour itself is unfortunately inconsistent and repetitive. Some checkpoints are a lot harder than the others, or too easy for an expert map. Be sure to use more variation such as water, heads, cocoa beans, trapdoors, daylight sensors, cactus, etc to space out your variation and have a better flow!
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
Unfortunately, your map is rejected.
The theme itself is quite unoriginal, as we already have rainbow/similar looking maps!
The build itself does lack a lot of shaping. The tower itself is a long cylinder, with no other details such as windows & stairs/slabs for shaping. In addition, your build lacks quite a lot of texturing, as it is all one solid colour/block (wool).
The parkour itself is unfortunately inconsistent and repetitive. Some checkpoints are a lot harder than the others, or too easy for an expert map. Be sure to use more variation such as water, heads, cocoa beans, trapdoors, daylight sensors, cactus, etc to space out your variation and have a better flow!
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
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