Accepted The Shire-Medium

[TNTfreak007]

Usernames: TNTfreak007, struqqles, SixpackMacka007
Map Name: The Shire
Fotos are attached
Plot ID: -94;126 I /plot tp TNTfreak007
Difficulty: Medium
Number of jumps: around 50

The Map is based on the movie "Lord of the Rings"
We have redone the jumps. Several people tested it with good respond!
The parkour is less clumsy and the flow has been improved a lot. But we also kept the varience.

 

[JakobMafia]

Hello! I'm here to give you some feedback (Note: I'm just a regular player giving feedback)

PARKOUR
Personally, I think your parkour is great, varied and fun to play! However, there are some frustrating jumps which lacks checkpoint somewhere in the middle part of the parkour, which should be nerfed in my opinion.
Secondly, there is one huge problem with the parkour, the major skip to chimney which lacks barriers around it, making it accessible for players to skip half of the course. You should add some barriers to prevent that.

BUILD
By looking at what you have build, it looks great and detailed, therefore it makes your course more enjoyable to play! Great job! Custom trees, bushes, somewhat nicely done island and other nice things.

THEME
I'm not really sure if there is a parkour similar to this, but I've never seen Lord of the Rings maps so it is a good chosen theme, however I do know there is lots of parkour courses involving island which is not the best to use nowadays. I guess it is alright theme nonetheless.

EXPERIENCE
Overall, I think your parkour is enjoyable and nicely done, but it lacks some additional barriers to prevent some major skips. The building is great and detailed, and your theme is alright. I'll give a score of 0.75+ (close to 1+ if not of the major skip)
I wish you luck with your parkour course!

 

[struqqles]

Hello! I'm here to give you some feedback (Note: I'm just a regular player giving feedback)

PARKOUR
Personally, I think your parkour is great, varied and fun to play! However, there are some frustrating jumps which lacks checkpoint somewhere in the middle part of the parkour, which should be nerfed in my opinion.
Secondly, there is one huge problem with the parkour, the major skip to chimney which lacks barriers around it, making it accessible for players to skip half of the course. You should add some barriers to prevent that.

BUILD
By looking at what you have build, it looks great and detailed, therefore it makes your course more enjoyable to play! Great job! Custom trees, bushes, somewhat nicely done island and other nice things.

THEME
I'm not really sure if there is a parkour similar to this, but I've never seen Lord of the Rings maps so it is a good chosen theme, however I do know there is lots of parkour courses involving island which is not the best to use nowadays. I guess it is alright theme nonetheless.

EXPERIENCE
Overall, I think your parkour is enjoyable and nicely done, but it lacks some additional barriers to prevent some major skips. The building is great and detailed, and your theme is alright. I'll give a score of 0.75+ (close to 1+ if not of the major skip)
I wish you luck with your parkour course!

Ty for the testing !! this really helps us ! we will of course fix the skip

 

[Mozzie]

Personally, I found the parkour a little too easy for a medium map. The length of the map however felt perfect. Perhaps add some more ladder jumps to spice it up a little.

 

[Elly_x]

Hello TNTfreak007, struqqles, and SixpackMacka007,

I will be putting your map in ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Please be patient as I discuss your map with the map judging team.

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly

 

[Elly_x]

Hello TNTfreak007, struqqles, and SixpackMacka007,

I will be putting your map into the reviewing stage. This means that your map isn't accepted or rejected. There are parts of your map that are solid but also parts that could be fixed before being fully accepted. You have until April 29th to fix the needed changes or your map will be automatically rejected.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a good. It is much neater now and more accurate.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! The main problem is that the parkour's flow was off. It had a lot of momentum jumps incorporated and back and forth path motion.

Thank you for taking the name to create this map, if you have any questions or have made the needed changes message me on discord at Elly#5555 so we can retest the map.
Elly

 

[Elly_x]

Hello TNTfreak007, struqqles, and SixpackMacka007,

Thank you for making the needed changes on your map! You map is now accepted, the parkour feels a lot better with less momentum jumps.

I hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555.
Elly