Rejected Thunder-Easy

[r3dstraw]

Theme: Thunder
Difficulty: Easy
Owner: EzGirlPvP_X (No Help)
33 Jumps and 3 CheckPoints
/Plot v EzGirlPvP_X
Screenshot:

3rd map hope it doesn't get rejected like always

 

[r3dstraw]

I changed alot of my parkour and the details i cant change the screenshot cuz im downloading something.
But look at my plot /Plot v EzGirlPvP_X

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi EzGirlPvP_X,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty original and interesting (I will not count "Cloud" as a map close to your theme), the build however is not really good, it's not really attractive and pretty messy, try to build your map on one and main build, and not on scattered build like you did. The parkour could be better, it's pretty varied, which is good, but I would like if you vary your blocks through the map, and not a little change in one part, for example, there is a lot of pane jumps through your map when there is only one vines and one trapdoor at the end, I will not talk about the difficulty because it's clearly a medium and not an easy, last tips : Carpets make the parkour harder if there is a roof sometimes, and soul sand don't works if you put a carpet on it

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !