Rejected Time's Ages

[Pigerty]

I think this course is hard. I was the only one to build this course. The username is Pigerty. The # of the plot is -54;122. Also I put my head in there to make the parkour harder even though it doesn't really fit with theme.

 

[BinLicker]

The submission format of this map is not correct. I would reccomend re-reading the submitting format.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Pigerty,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is somewhat original, there are similar themed maps, but none exactly like this.
The build isn't great. In the future, try to have one or two main builds that represent your theme, rather than having multiple smaller builds with parkour floating between them. Having an excessive number of jumps floating around the void & build can make your map look a bit messy.
The parkour is very repetitive. I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when creating jumps, as this will make your map more enjoyable.
The length and difficulty are good for a medium map.

In future submissions, please follow the format listed in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ this makes it easier for members of the community to test your map and provide feedback, as well as making it easier for judges to locate and judge your map :)

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.