Rejected ToadTownCentre - Hard/Expert

[GamersDecision]

Creator: GamersDecision
Map Name: ToadTownCentre
Jumps: 66
Checkpoints: 5
/plot visit GamersDecision
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Plot ID 45;-15

Update: I extended it slightly and put another checkpoint in the stage. I think it now has enough jumps
to be a Expert stage.
I also added a new picture showing what I added.

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi GamersDecision,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty original, because there is no "Paper Mario" maps (There is a lot of Mario maps, but I still found the theme of your map original). The build could be better, it's a bit plain in my opinion, and pretty messy because of the floating jumps, build more your map on/in the build, and avoid above or around. The parkour is not really good, it's a bit varied, but still a bit repetitive (There is a lot of head jumps for example, mostly inside houses), and I found your map pretty confusing, there is a lot invisible blocks (Don't forget for water, you can use Worldedit !), and even if there is a lot of signs to indicate the path, they are not always well placed (Example : We are at the red dot on this screenshot, and the signs is in the orange rectangle, why is it so far ? http://prntscr.com/mz1e65)

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !