Rejected Toothbrush - Medium

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Dmixy

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Map Makers: Dmixy and Defxnestration
Map Name: Toothbrush
/plot v Dmixy 3
Difficulty: Medium
~56 jumps
4 checkpoints


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Hayleyx

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Hello,

I regret to inform you that your map has been rejected.
Unfortunately this theme is unoriginal as we already have maps based on tooth/toothpaste/toothbrush

The build is accurate to the theme so good job on that!
Sadly the build is lacking some depth and texture- try adding some more depth, texturing, detailing to your build.

The parkour fits the length and difficulty so good job on that! There was one jump (the piston jump) that was inconsistent to the rest of the map. At times this maps felt repetitive due to the variation clumps (often there'd be 2/3 jumps with the same variation. The parkour overall felt underwhelming and unfun.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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